Broken dreams.
Depressed soul.
Sadness screams.
Pointless goals.
Wrecked thoughts.
Closed doors.
Opinions fought.
Impure cores.
Forever locked.
Is that broken soul.
Broken dreams.
Depressed soul.
Sadness screams.
Pointless goals.
Wrecked thoughts.
Closed doors.
Opinions fought.
Impure cores.
Forever locked.
Is that broken soul.
Very beautifully expressed something which is often difficult to express through words !!
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Thanks!
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You are welcome 🙂
Thanks for sharing !! Just tc
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I’m glad I could. 🙂
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Am glad that you are glad,
I really liked this with of yours, read it twice, wish I could press the like button twice:)
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Thank you so much! That’s really encouraging to hear! 😀
I’ll just imagine I got another like.
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Imagination, one of the best virtues that humans are blessed with:)
Am happy that I could encourage you may God bless you:)
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Yep,so true. 🙂 Ameen and I pray the same for you.
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Prayers do work at times..
Thank you so much for the prayers ….it means a lot !!!
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Welcome 🙂
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🙂 🙂
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Soul weighs around 3-3.5 kgs… Read it somewhere, science says that’s why dead body loses its weigh by that margin.. !!
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Oh wow.Thanks for sharing.
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My pleasure, I never find that strength to cross check this fact, especially after I lost my mom…
But it was fascinating !!
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I’m sorry for your loss.
Yes it is!
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Pls don’t be sorry, I have made peace with this fact
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❤
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Thanks!
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Inkyyyyy!!!!!!!
This is awesome!
The words…… ufff…… they get right to ur heart!
❤❤❤
Oh and CONGRATZ!
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SJ! Thank you so much! ❤
Hmm congratz for..? 😛
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Welcome! ❤
Haha………… well maybe I am a little late………… I checked in and found out that u got through high school?
Just wanted to congratulate u for that 😛
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Haha yes thank you.I thought you were talking about that. 😀
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🙂
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Of course though……….. I tend to have this intelligence effect on ppl 😛
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lovely poem Hiba 🙂 it speaks a lot in few words..
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Umm hehe wrong blog.
This is Hiba’s blog:
https://dreamslikebrokenglass.wordpress.com/
It’s Inky here. 😀 Thanks for the complement though? 😉
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hahaha.sorry Inky .I might be dreaming about Hiba 😀 or my work-blog-work juggling /multitasking missed somewhere 😀 😀
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Haha no prob at all. XD
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Thanks Sis 🙂
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*Opinions
You got that word wrong there x)
And Doublewee. Ooo. Doublewww .
Wonderful ❤ Keep writing .^_^
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Thanks!
Thanks so much! ❤ I appreciate it.
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*Opinions
Lovely piece though.^_^
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Thanks alot!
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Dude! Epic MaSha Allah! Keep the flame going on 😉
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Thanks!
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All the apt things expressed!
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Heyyyyyy Inky, how are you? I’m back. Broke my foot, so was unable o get everything done that I wanted to during this break. I’ll have to get it all done bit by bit I guess.
Your poem has a very light flow to it, although it is so sad. Job well done at expressing the inner feeling and state of a broken soul. I guess that we all have somewhat of a broken soul, so long that we live on this Earth.
Hope you are doing super duper well sweety.
Have a lovely week.
🙂 ❤
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Hii Staci!
Alhamdulillah I’m fine.How are you? Hows your foot?How was your trip?
Thank you for understanding and liking my poem. 🙂
I’ll be waiting for your posts.Okay?
Take care. ❤ Keep writing!
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Hey Inky, great to hear that all is well. I’m ok, trying to stay put and recover. My foot doesn’t hurt anymore, but I have to lay low until May 3rd. Hopefully I’ll be free after that. Ugh. Haha.
You’re more than welcome, my friend. Thank you for your lovely reply.
🙂 ❤
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Staying put is something I can’t do so I hope I never break my foot.Haha. XD But to be honest how it feels when you want to walk more but you can’t.Last time I had a high fever I felt so caged 😦 because I love walking!
Oh just seven more days to go then. 😉
Hoping for your speedy recovery In sha Allah. ❤
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Hahaha. Yea, I’m not one to stay put either. It’s tough.
Thank you so much Inky.
🙂 ❤
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Welcome. 🙂
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😉
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This is so real! Brilliant 🙂
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Thanks! 🙂
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It’s always a pleasure! 🙂
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Broken and evolving. 😉
I like how you expressed things here.
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Thanks!
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