First time I’m responding to a Prompt. Do read and comment.
Behind jolly faces,
I’ve seen the emptiness they hide.
Behind authentic points,
I’ve seen the loop holes that lie.
Behind miserable faces,
I’ve seen the hope that flies.
Behind cloudy spects,
I’ve seen those beautiful eyes.
Behind deep scars,
I’ve seen the stories that reside.
Behind the darkness of this world,
I’ve seen the light that shines.
So make no mistake,
I do know this world of mine.
-Inky
Aww,this is beautiful, I love a good rhyme too 😄. There’s always a silver lining behind every dark
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Thank you Ameena! 😀
Truely!
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You did great even though it was your very first attempt. 😊 Masha’Allah. Loved it! ❤
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Thanks! ❤
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Thanks! ❤ I'm glad you liked.
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Oooo you certainly do know this world of yours. Pretty stuff!
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Haha XD
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Wow! You wrote the while thing????? Ahem ahem how stupid of me, ofcourse you did, why would I even doubt this insanely awesome skill of yours? 😛
MaashaaAllah inky!
And yeah you do know your world………… Perfectly written, couldn’t describe it any better 😀
❤❤❤❤
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Haha yep I did and if I tell you where I wrote this you would be completely mind blown. XD Really. 😛
I might not this world completely,but I do know it. 🙂
Thank you! ❤
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Hehe really? Where? *CURIOUS*
Haha yes………. (y)
Welcome! ❤
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Physics class.No joke. XD
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Mashallah inky! Beautifully rhymed!
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WHAT??????? PHYSICS???????? LOL!!!!! You weren’t wrong when you said my mind would be blown. Seriously mind=blown 😶
Oh well, looks like good things do happen in the presence of physics XD
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Ahahaha noooo you know I don’t like it. 😛
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Yeah I know………. And I even understand you for not liking it cuz me personally doesn’t like it either XD
But but but we gotta admit that something good came out of this class 😛
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:p
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Great Poem. I loved the perfect lines, making sense of Life.
If you know your World, you will Survive.
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Thanks!
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This was so beautiful….
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Hiiibaaaa Hiiii! ❤
Tysm! ❤
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Hito you to!! :*
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very beautifully described the truth in poetry
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Thank you so much.So happy you liked. ❤
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my pleasure 🙂
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Oh this is sooo beautiful and deep! Loved it. 😍
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I’m glad.😁
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