The following poem was written by a dear friend of mine.I have perhaps memorized it better than her since I adore every bit of it.So I thought I should share it with you all. 😀
Not by colour,not by face,
We are all bound to the limits of our race.
Fear we must as the times are dark,
A hope for a hope to light some spark.
The hearts are distant,love costs much more,
Making friend in the land of wars is a chore.
The time has come to look back and plea,
How once the boundaries were seamless and free.
I constantly try to convince my friend to write more,more poems to be specific.She then tells me to talk about something that is Possible.
I am just left to wonder what else she has in the beautiful mind of hers.I really do hope that she tries to write again,someday.I hope you liked it as much as I do.Oh and if you can think of a neat title do share your idea.
Your friend amazing as a poet.
I loved it.
What do you think of ‘Differences’ as a title?
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I’m glad you liked.
Yes,I think that will be suitable.
Thank you.
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“How once the boundaries were seamless and free.”
Wow! The whole poem is brilliant, but the last line just blew me away.
Title: Restraints 😛
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I know right!
Alright thank you. 😛
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Damn itt!! I was thinking restraints as well 😦
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Haha 😛 Great minds think alike.
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Wow your friend is really talented :O
I hope she does write more. Or we’d be missing out on a lot here in the blogging and poetry worlds! You have to convince her. She’s so good masha Allah
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You know what I might not have memorised any of my poems as well as hers.The words were just stuck in my head!
I have tried SO many times! 😦
Masha Allah.
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Oh well. Humare qismat
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In sha Allah I will try again.
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LOVE IT!
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Thank you!
Loody,it has been SO LONG!
Tatzakarny? 🙄
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hehe yesss!
Oh of course I remember you!
I left that place! Missing you so much though!
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Good 😀
I miss you too! 😦 We can keep in touch here.In sha Allah if you dont disappear. 😛
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haha hopefully I won’t 😛
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Fullyhoping then 😛
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Did you write anything new?
You haven’t updated your blog since umm Eid? 😛
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Yep, I did write two more poems, but erm..I don’t know if I’ll post them online :$
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Alright.
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Congrats on your blog! I’m so happy for you! :’)
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Tysm ❤
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Your friend is as talented as you are. And you are so sweet to show her love. Let her know I support her too and we would love to hear more from her.
I shall go with Self Imposed Restrictions.
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Thank you for your sweet comment.
I think I will take a screenshot of this. 😀
Great,thank you!
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Hahaha go for it. If it motivates your friend by all means do.
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She saw the post and comments and was VERY happy!
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Awww I am so glad 😀
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This poem was….. *drums (alot of them)*…….MIND BLOWINGGG……
😍
And well ur friend is sooo lucky to have friends like u ❤
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Tysm ❤ I am so happy you liked. 😀
Alhamdulillah 🙄
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Oh sister, you are so generous as usual! Your friend is lucky to have you masha’Allah!
Tell her she is an amazing poet & we are all waiting for her to create a blog on WP 🙂
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I am lucky to have good friends,Alhamdulillah.
Yes,I will diffidently tell her that. 😀 Thank you for your sweet comment.
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Lovely. There’s a sense of hope at the end. Life is tough, but if we don’t have hope, then we’re doomed. I don’t know what kind of title I would give this. Maybe, “Hope” or “Monochrome”. I don’t know really. Just giving my 2 cents worth.
🙂
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Thank you for your sweet comment and suggestions. Much appreciated. 🙂
I adore your poems! ❤ Oh and I have so any to read from your blog.
Btw Hi 😀
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Ohhhh, you’re so sweet. Thank you so much. I’m so glad you do. And your blog is so lovely too. I will be following.
🙂 ❤
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Welcome plus Thank you 🙂
Followed back.
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🙂 ❤
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Inspiring poetry. Loved this work
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Thank you! (:
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Here is a harsh reality embedded in this poem.
Very beautiful piece Masha Allah 🙂
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment. 🙂
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’twas a pleasure, my friend 🙂
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